Martin Bryan wrote:
> My initial (unofficial comments) on Rick's draft are:
>
> Foreword
> List of standards needs updating to current version numbering, 1-10, and
> current part names
OK
> Scope, 2nd Para
> "use" should be "uses"
OK
> Normative References, 2nd Para
> The para in front of the entries should be removed as it is a subset of the
> standard paragraph that is automatically added at the start of this section.
OK
> The paragraph beginning "The definitions..." needs to be under the
> terms-and-definitions element (the rnc model needs updating to allow this
> need)
OK
> Annex A:
> In first para change "the schema language" to "this standard"
> In second item change Dutch to French in both places. NB: Dutch has no
> accented characters and only one additional character that I am aware of:
> the example should show how the set of accented characters relevant for
> French can be split out of ISO-8859-1 in such a way that any characters used
> solely for other European languages (e.g. German, Spanish, Swedish, etc) are
> flagged as errors.
See comment in other post.
+ thanks for the updated PDF
Cheers
Rick Jelliffe
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