[dsdl-discuss] Re: Proposed Technical Corrigenda for NVDL

At 2007-01-31 10:24 +0900, MURATA Makoto wrote:
>Here is a draft of the first technical corrigenda for NVDL. Ken,
>could you publish this as a numbered document of SC34? Martin,
>this is for the upcoming WG1 meeting.

Some comments to take to the meeting:

>Page 11, the last line of Clause 6.4.10
>
>Convert the last itemized list (- Finally..) to a normal paragraph.

This is covered in http://www.jtc1sc34.org/repository/0717rev2.htm

>Page 18, Clause 7.6, Example
>
>Replace "one" by "two".

This is covered in http://www.jtc1sc34.org/repository/0717rev2.htm

>Page 20, Clause 8.4
>
>Replace the first item in the itemized list with the item as below:
>
>- If an element secction s is the root element section, then I_M(s)
>= mrt and elemTrans(I_M(s), namespace(s), I_A(s))).

Typo: "secction" -> "section"

Typo: ")))" -> "))"

>Page 22, Clause 8.7.2, Note 1
>
>Delete "expected to be".

This is covered in http://www.jtc1sc34.org/repository/0717rev2.htm

>Page 28, Clause 8.5, the 3rd line in this page
>
>Replace "s" immediately after "s1, s2, ...," by "sm".

Note this is not the printed page numbered 28, but page numbered 22
(it is the 28th page in the PDF, but up until now the page numbers
have been printed page numbers).

>Page 29, Annex A
>
>Replace
>
>&amp
>
>with
>
>&
>
>twice.
>
>Page 33, Annex B
>
>Replace
>
>&amp
>
>with
>
>&
>
>twice.
>
>Page 39, Annex C.2
>
>Replace
>
>&amp
>
>with
>
>&
>
>twice.

The above three are covered in
http://www.jtc1sc34.org/repository/0717rev2.htm though it appears the
instructions in that document are not precise.

I hope this helps.

. . . . . . . . . . . . Ken

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