Martin Bryan wrote:
> Please find attached an update for the normative text for DSRL. I
> believe that, apart from the informative Annex B, this draft for the
> FDIS contains all of the changes suggested during last week's Oslo
> meeting. I would be grateful if those of you at the meeting could
> look carefully at the changes to clauses 4 and 6, and the revised
> RELAX NG schema in Annex A, and confrim that the changes that have
> been made conform with what you were expecting. Thanks.
Page v, 1st paragraph:
iSO/IEC -> ISO/IEC
Page 2, 2nd paragraph in §4:
attrubte -> attribute
Page 3, §6.1:
You draft says that if a content of dsrl:from/dsrl:to contains qualified
name then that this namespace must be declared on the corresponding
dsrl:from/dsrl:to element. Why is this? Why it is not allowed to declare
prefix once on dsrl:maps for example? I think that DSRL should left
definition of namespace declarations in scope to respective Namespaces
in XML 1.0 specification (section 6.1 Namespace Scoping).
Page 4, 2nd paragraph from top (also 2nd para from bottom):
"... have been declared within ***the schema***."
Shouldn't it be ***map***?
Page 5, 1st note:
Last line is wrongly indented
Page 6, 4th line:
wrongly indented
Page 7, Defining entities:
It seems that my previous comments (see
http://lists.dsdl.org/dsdl-discuss/2006-08/0002.html) were not
incorporated into the draft and I can't find minutes from Montreal
meeting that would justify rejection of my suggestions.
To summarize my comments to entities: The current proposal is far from
being useful. Because:
1. Doesn't allow references between entities
2. Markup inside replacement text is escaped -- so it is not markup
anymore and can't be processed without reparsing as a separate document
3. Mechanism for attaching entity definitions to document instance is
not defined.
Page 22:
XML sample document is not well-formed because it references entities
not defined in Adresse.dtd
Page 27:
What is the purpose of including entity definitions in XSLT file when no
entities are used in this XSLT?
Page 32:
It seems that XSLT file is outputted twice, search ]] characters.
Moreover it is not clear how entities could be mapped using XSLT, as
XPath data model (which is used by XSLT) doesn't preserve entity references.
Jirka
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