[dsdl-discuss] Re: Draft of the Part 7 FDIS

> Dear colleagues,
>
> Attached please find my latest draft for ISO/IEC FDIS 19757-7. Unless
> I hear comments next week, I will send this document to ITTF.

It looks good to me. Congratulations!

Just some minor typos:

s6.1 p1 "An CREPDL" should be "A CREPDL".
s6.1 p1 "The elements ... is" should be "The elements ... are"

s7.2 NOTE 2. The note is unclear: what "two"? Same problem with the
following paragraph. Replace "two" with "two attributes." Also, spelling
"discprepancies" should be "discrepancies"

s7.6 p1 "infintie" should be "infinite"

Annex A p5 begins "Case 4". "orstrings" should be "or strings"

Cheers
Rick Jelliffe

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